tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post5595107327475277739..comments2013-07-24T19:34:25.437+01:00Comments on Poetry Of a Dawning Star: Mass Effect Poetry Of a Dawning Star (PODS) CH 1Robert Fiercehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05429890539677105978noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-46513492668410136852013-07-24T19:34:25.437+01:002013-07-24T19:34:25.437+01:00I'm happy you like it , perhaps you would like...I'm happy you like it , perhaps you would like some of my other works as well? Why don't you give them a try and see if they interest you. And thanks for your feedback.Robert Fiercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05429890539677105978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-82134835831559332452013-07-24T19:32:22.840+01:002013-07-24T19:32:22.840+01:00Always :)
Stay tuned for more!Always :)<br /><br />Stay tuned for more!Robert Fiercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05429890539677105978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-15598491275142964882013-07-24T19:31:24.415+01:002013-07-24T19:31:24.415+01:00Hey there , thx! In any of my works , in order to ...Hey there , thx! In any of my works , in order to read the next chapter , all you have to do is go back on the top of the page and select the button from there. It should say Chapter 1 , Chapter 2 .. etc.Robert Fiercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05429890539677105978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-3843885457037773402013-07-24T19:29:55.258+01:002013-07-24T19:29:55.258+01:00Soon , all you have to do is check back often and ...Soon , all you have to do is check back often and see if the next Chapter has been added. Thanks for reading!Robert Fiercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05429890539677105978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-3060739973528231932013-07-24T19:29:08.798+01:002013-07-24T19:29:08.798+01:00I'm glad you like it! Yes i am constantly work...I'm glad you like it! Yes i am constantly working on this project and other projects as well. Currently working on 3 books , 2 children's books , 4 short stories and some actual poetry. Chapters are coming ! Even though it might seem slow.Robert Fiercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05429890539677105978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-84252893313427306902013-07-24T19:26:08.490+01:002013-07-24T19:26:08.490+01:00Thank you for the feedback ! I just wanted to say ...Thank you for the feedback ! I just wanted to say how much i appreciate the fact that you took the time to leave such a constructive feedback. It helped quite a lot. Hope to hear from you soon.Robert Fiercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05429890539677105978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-3174791385551334382013-07-24T19:23:31.385+01:002013-07-24T19:23:31.385+01:00Glad you liked it! Yes i am. I'm currently wor...Glad you liked it! Yes i am. I'm currently working on Chapters 3 and 4. Be sure to check my blog often.Robert Fiercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05429890539677105978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-51590977857519774842013-07-24T19:22:17.214+01:002013-07-24T19:22:17.214+01:00Thanks for the feedback , you can now have a look ...Thanks for the feedback , you can now have a look at the next chapter.Robert Fiercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05429890539677105978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-10317409585898190142013-03-30T20:13:06.736+00:002013-03-30T20:13:06.736+00:00Well i certainly didn't expect that ending to ...Well i certainly didn't expect that ending to this chapter,nice fresh story,i like the fact that this is not another mass effect 3 sory "during" or "after" with the characters in the game,and the fact that it's different and stands apart but keeps within the same universe at the same time.Can't wait to read the next.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17968894921085131146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-35482857325927570802013-03-30T19:52:23.347+00:002013-03-30T19:52:23.347+00:00more please :Dmore please :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00690051647720822898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-26498859871565411602013-03-30T19:43:03.027+00:002013-03-30T19:43:03.027+00:00Hey man ,Good story! Where can i find the next cha...Hey man ,Good story! Where can i find the next chapter?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13996105296821304684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-31627994249717060172013-03-30T01:00:17.093+00:002013-03-30T01:00:17.093+00:00My bioware forums account is K2LU533My bioware forums account is K2LU533Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05608532614819413795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-59654589016293376732013-03-29T19:37:19.185+00:002013-03-29T19:37:19.185+00:00Sounds good to meSounds good to meAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05608532614819413795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-19956004472395645632013-03-29T07:06:02.268+00:002013-03-29T07:06:02.268+00:00My name on fb is Porii Eoaoe
and my gmail name is ...My name on fb is Porii Eoaoe<br />and my gmail name is Al.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09940284475209081783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-47424313162245218702013-01-01T21:21:13.939+00:002013-01-01T21:21:13.939+00:00When will you put up the next part of the book? I ...When will you put up the next part of the book? I want to know what happends nextAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07057776462480300822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-45615646581832775202013-01-01T16:46:25.512+00:002013-01-01T16:46:25.512+00:00Nice Act need some work here and there
BTW Are you...Nice Act need some work here and there<br />BTW Are you still working on this?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06692897224329742683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-13300374288235440682012-10-20T14:32:00.350+01:002012-10-20T14:32:00.350+01:00Love your story. You need some "glitter"...Love your story. You need some "glitter" though. We're reading a story that hopes to be a book someday, right? So you need to describe the environment with a bit more detail, to bring the atmosphere of a quarian ship a bit closer to people who never played mass effect. "Narrow" corridors and "scavenged" ship don't really cut it. I see you have a flamboyant imagination so I know you can :)<br /><br />If you meant to do this or think is unneccessary, ignore my comment.<br />Loved your story nontheless.<br /><br />@Seigi Susui - Damn, if you people collaborate and somehow manage to publish a book, I'm buying a dozen for my family! They need to broaden their horizons. (Read: They need to read some stories like this)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07030302179796762189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-32289693385361041362012-07-26T05:58:09.154+01:002012-07-26T05:58:09.154+01:00listen if you ever want to talk I have some ideas ...listen if you ever want to talk I have some ideas and really could use your help if your interested I'm doing a mass effect colab wit ha few others and we are always looking for more people.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567637228477381855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-43054852642757168012012-07-12T22:47:11.683+01:002012-07-12T22:47:11.683+01:00Love it. Are you still continuing the story?Love it. Are you still continuing the story?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15522621191560945796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6739210106314548824.post-86676992950520933082012-06-30T05:25:00.482+01:002012-06-30T05:25:00.482+01:00Nice story, sure to read the next oneNice story, sure to read the next oneAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01956186150881192103noreply@blogger.com